Great character descriptions Garuth! Next time you could also include some more detail about the personality of Oliver, as you have given a good description of the personalities of Mr. Bumble and Mr. Fagin - keep up the good work!
Great character descriptions Garuth! Next time you could also include some more detail about the personality of Oliver, as you have given a good description of the personalities of Mr. Bumble and Mr. Fagin - keep up the good work!
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