So this happened last weekend on Sunday 5:00 pm im going to Jump this is how it happened.My dad said that's it we're going to Jump!! 10 minutes later… Were at Jump I exclaimed would be 50 decibels. Now a safety briefing which vital towards your personal health.I wore my fabulous birthday socks 5 minutes later...my dad said my feet are going to blow up like a nuclear bomb he exclaimed dramatically. I thought WOW that's impossible my mind said to me.Well I seriously tried to wall walk to be honest.




Later on we got Burger King so we ordered a coupon with bacon,mayo and onion rings this is what i got for a drink fanta frozen slushy fanta so good i could not resist it because it has fanta which is a slushy. My brain said to me good choice but dont ask your dad for that again because it has lots of sugar and food acid also food colouring. So off we went the end...

I like that you used similes and punctuation By Aleena

treasure hunt

I was suddenly shocked! My mum said were going to orewa.I shouted so loud yay! My friend beni was saying what was that 2 days later… It's friday in the summer holidays we got in my dad's Mazda CX 9 with a whole bunch of food in the boot.       

Off we went in the scorching hot sun. First of all through the waterview tunnel next across a 40 minute high way tickling  my baby sister Faith she laughed so hard she cried. We all finally arrived at the motel,I rushed into my room an,I changed into my swimming togs the sparkling sea was so cold i was shivering.

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book review

Dogman, LORD OF THE FLEAS

Author: Dav Pilkey

CHARACTERS: Lil Petey ,Dog man,Chief,Sarah,Milly,Petey,Piggy,Bub,Cruncky and 80-HD (80 hexagon droid) the character which is most enthusiast is lil Petey he is a very good mechanic.

PLOT

At chapter 5 LIl Petey,Dogman and 80- end up battling lord if the fleas with petey on their side. At the end, Dog Man grows large.Lil Petey goes inside 80-HD gets brown paint and sprays it on the fleas squirrel machine which is grey its 25 metres tall Dogman is now 100 metres tall and crushs lord of the  fleas squirrel machine.Dogman shrinks to his normal size.

MY OPINION 

I liked the book because it tells a tale of happiness and funnies.There was a bit of a scary part when Petey and lil Petey nearly got squished by lord of the fleas giant robot brontosaurs.My favourite part when Petey got into a battle with lord of the fleas Brontosaurus.In this story I learned to never steal and be responsible.

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