Wednesday, June 19, 2019

RECOUNT!!!

The weekends are awesome
On Saturday I was so! Jubilant it was soccer photos! I woke up at 7:25 it was the last day that my grandad was here just with me, mum and my baby sister. So 10 minutes later… Finally, it was over. I’m in AC Milan   

Then my soccer game AC Milan Vs Bologna it was amazing! We won 4 to 1.When they got the final goal they thought they won the world cup they all exclaimed in joy! I just thought it was very weird  10 minutes later… Back at home eating 8 pieces of sushi (Wow that's a lot) Who would eat 8 pieces of sushi I deserved it!
Then I just played fortnite it was literally awesome. The latest mode Horde Rush so insane I cried “help to many brute’s. The final boss yeah! Help it following me! Friend please did I do something wrong or not?”.1 hour later…  hashtag VICTORY ROYALE!!! 4 challenges complete 1 hour later… Altogether 200 zombie kills. Let's rock n’ roll kids (My mind what.. ) My baby sister pushed me oh you wanna go, kid.AHH!! She finally went away now let’s play Solo
In Solo pretending to be a fake default stop god no please no everybody I see pew!! I’m dead someone at least be friendly finally someone is friendly.
“OFF” now!! My mum looked so furious
She looked like a time ticking bomb to explode I just pulled a face at her she imploded okay fine.
NOW!! RIGHT NOW!!! Or I’ll cut one of your CD’s no please I begged I actually cried. So I viewed youtube on my Chromebook I watched the PRO-AM AO(Australian open) I just wish Ghost ayaden won( a youtuber) plays on the PS4 the best on the PS4. Psst.. not kidding way more complex than Ninja and Tfue. Now watching  Lachlan, laser beam, RNG Mrfreshasian playing paintball + more youtuber like LUFU and Bazza Gazza and guess who won RNG Mr freshasian and Lazar beam 2 of my most favourite YouTubers.It was awesome I wish I was a famous youtuber.
By Matthew, I like the way you used punctuation I think to improve on writing more

1 comment:

  1. I think that your writing was really outstanding because you used a rang of good vocab and your character was full of expreshon

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